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posted by [identity profile] elanurel.livejournal.com at 03:09pm on 10/10/2006
Just getting around to catching up on LJ today... And I have to say, I loved this piece. I loved the imagery (being a formerly earnest young poet) and especially Sam's POV. I don't write much from the second person myself, but I think it really added to the effect.

It occurs to you how you prefer it when Dean was silent. You are so used to him being the older one, the responsible one, the one holding the pieces together, that it hurts to finally realize that maybe, just maybe, Dean is as damaged as you are.

Our poor broken boys...

BTW, I added you as a friend today. ;-P
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posted by [identity profile] somersaulter.livejournal.com at 03:16pm on 10/10/2006
Yea, I first wrote this in a third person but I felt it couldn't really tell the story, so I re-wrote it in second person. It's my first time writing in second person, so I'm glad it turned out okay.

*sighs* They're so so broken.

And I added you back. It's great to have such a talented writer on my flist. =)
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posted by [identity profile] elanurel.livejournal.com at 03:36pm on 10/10/2006
It's a hard POV to write. I don't do it much myself.

And I added you back. It's great to have such a talented writer on my flist. =)

Yay for adding. But I don't know that I'd go that far — more the trials of a misspent youth in regards to the writing. ;-P
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